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punk-rebel
Reviewed @ 11:43 a.m. on 2003-06-24
First Impression= [5/5]
I wanted to see what kind of person you were after seeing your layout.
Layout= [26/30]
It’s nice. I like a bit more color, but it’s still nicely organized. Also, the way the links are just irked me a bit – try putting a dash in between each one. But the blinkies and imood are at the bottom out of the way, good job! I like how "I just want to fade away…" fades into the layout – nice touch! Credit to MI Designs.
Content= [15/20]
Tons of your sentences ended in exclamation points. It just seemed that your dark layout didn’t really match your personality – which was actually several times pretty bright and bubbly. Those exclamation marks irked me. The little things do that. Like the beginning of this entry. In that entry you also kept saying well, this and well, that. That was also a bit annoying – maybe you could have slipped in some anyway’s?
It says you have depression anxiety order, but in the first entries I read you didn’t sound too depressed. That’s very good, I’m glad that you’re happy. It’s just that sometimes you’re a bit TOO bright and bubbly. I found that many of your entries were all about liking Darren and saying yes to Nick and wanting to break up with Nick and Rick likes you and Zach is hot. Mentioning of boys is fine (I mention them quite frequently) but I don’t really do entire entries about them. Perhaps I’m being hypocritical.
But the next entry you wrote, this one, was one of your better ones. I’m not saying what happened in it was good, I’m saying that it wasn’t totally about boys and it didn’t say “well” and it didn’t have 50 zillion exclamation marks. It was very emotional and touching and moving, I hope all of you can get things sorted out soon. This entry was also very emotional and I began to get more into your diary as I kept reading. This is the time when I started to see the DAO in you.
I liked this entry a lot.
I was pretty much never bored, which is very good. All in all, as I read it got more interesting!
Where's the link= [5/5]
Smack dab on the Reviews page, easy to find.
Errors= [3/5]
Grammar/spelling, and your guestbook link is broken.
Contact= [3/4]
Notes, book, email.
Organization= [10/10]
Quite organized.
Updates= [9/10]
A couple of skipped days with multiples.
Bonus= [5/5]
Cast, rings, cliques, recommended, reviews, extras.
Will I be coming back?= [4/6]
Maybe.
What I thought of the diary?
Good job, you are a pretty emotional person.
Number of entries read= 16
Total: 85/100
Reviewed by: Caitlin.
