We'll Either Make You Or Break You....Do You Have It In You? USA Reviews

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carebearxox
Reviewed @ 4:22 p.m. on 2003-04-26

First Impression = 1/5

EEK!

Where's the link? = 5/5

Under Extras.

Layout = 10/30

Credit to Couture. I went and viewed the designers website. You butchered this template. Instead of the soft tones it was designed with, you have it white, neon pink, and neon green. Why? If I were that designer, I'd be ashamed to have my name associated with these colors. Sorry, they are a horrible combination. Your guestbook doesn't match your current layout at all. Credit to Blue-Swirl. Soft blue and cream colors, the plaid mix.

Usually I don't deduct points for templates that are by other designers, because it's your diary being scored, not their design. However, since you altered it the way you did, I don't feel bad for this low score.

Content = 10/20

Your entries are really long. But you really don't talk about anything. It's almost like a daylog, lacking emotion but what appears to be forced humor. You'll curse or throw in some slang here and there.

I read all of April. Since I couldn't find anything really exciting or linkworthy, I dropped into May of 2002. But I found the same thing almost a year ago. You write about your day, what you did, and it's really not entertaining, at least to me. I'm sure it's great for you and friends of yours. But considering I don't know you or your friends, I was kind of bored.

Since back then you were talking about getting yearbooks and such, I assumed you were right out of high school or in high school. But your recent entries talk about how much you drink, and even how the lawyer friend of your father bought you drinks. Maybe an about you or a cast page would help out new readers, because I'm completely confused.

Your title pretty much sums up the content.

Errors = 3/5

You have 'Extras' on your template twice. On some of your older pages, the link to 'Today' doesn't work. Some links to your reviews don't work.

I don't know if this is a link error or just my computer, but I received 'website not responding' four times when attempting your 'rate me' link.

Contact = 3/4

Notes, Guestbook, Email

Organization = 10/10

All links to the right.

Updates = 6/10

Skips, once in a while multiples.

Bonus = 3/5

Guestmap, rate me, page of extras.

Will I be coming back? = 0/6

I'm sorry, but no. The template is hideous and your entries were boring.

What I thought of the diary?

Keep in mind this is just my opinion.

Number of entries read = About 30

Total: 51/100

Reviewed by: Melody

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