cocodancer
Reviewed @ 9:04 a.m. on 2003-05-12
you make me smile
First Impression= [1/5]
Um...what the heck happened to the image? From what I can tell there's suppossed to be a somewhat large image loading at the top of the screen but, I've refreshed the site 5 times & I keep getting a X where the image should be. Also, the links are very cluttered. Just way to many.
Layout= [5/30]
I have to give you a 10. Simply because theres is no layout. The navigation makes me want to puke. Links are scattered everywhere. I read that you are only 13 so I gave you a couple of points. I also noticed this isn't a layout you made so i can't figure out why the image doesn't work and why the navigation is scattered everywhere. I also don't like the way the colors look together. It sorta blinds me in a way.
Content= [1/20]
I read all your entries. There aren't any details no excitement. To tell you the truth, most of the entries just made me want to go take a nap and review this diary later. Personally, I can't stand this diary. You have WAY to many pointless entries Your can't stand your writing style...it makes me want to cram your hands down a food processor. Maybe it's because your only 13 I'm not sure but, (somehow) I read a ton of your entries and none of them were worth reading. There all basically "i did this today, i feel sick, i am sore etc,". A diary is for you deepest thoughts and emotions so, PLEASE use it for. I don't mean to be harsh it's just I saw you submitted your diary to many reviewers and, as a reviewer, I would dread having to read such a pointless diary as yours. Its's nothing personal it's just theres no indeepth emotion in any of your entries which, become rather boring after a while. But, beyond all that there aren't even 15 entries!
Where's the link= [5/5]
Under Reviews.
Errors= [4/5]
I didn't find any major errors...besides the fact the image doesn't work.
Contact= [4/4]
All i'm going to say is..if someone wants to talk to you they can .
Organization= [1/10]
I gave you a 1 on organization because i'm not sure if I can give you a 0. The organization of your diary sucks. Sure, you can find whatever it us your looking for but, jesus it's WAY to "clashy". I have a MAJOR suggestion....Under your Navagation section put ALL your links and why in the crap do you have &! before the different sections? That really bugs me. AND why do you have an about the girl section? Um...shouldn't that go in a bio which link SHOULD be placed in the navigation section? I don't know I hate your layout, your writing and everything else. It all makes me what to puke my guts out. When I first viewed your diary the lack of organiztion of the links made me want to leave right away. If your layouts image isn't going to work at least make your you have a clean and easy to use navigation...it makes your diary look a bit better.
Updates= [2/10]
You do not update everyday. And when you do update...I don't really think it should be considered an update because you don't really write anything except "i've been dancing/swimming, im sore, im sick etc." People get easily sick of reading the same thing over and over and over and over again. Perhaps you should put just a little thought into whether or not you really need/want a diary.
Bonus= [0/5]
I'm not giving you a bonus because nothing on your site is bonus worthy. I'm sorry for being such a harsh critic but, it's not in me to lie to people about their diary. A diary review is to get someone else's HONEST opinion of your diary so that you know the things that you might want to consider changing.
Will I be coming back?= [0/6]
no.
What I thought of the diary?
Once again, I don't want to be harsh or anything I just do not like your diary in any possible way. I spent about an hour or so reviewing it and I feel sick to my tummy. There's no layout the navigation makes no sense the entries bore me. I'm sorry if I hurt your feelings but, as a reviewer, I feel as though it is my job to review the diary and be completely honest. There's no sense in lying to someone about what you really think about their diary because if you do they'll never know what they should do to make their diary more appealing.
Number of entries read= sadly, all of them.
Total: 23/100
Reviewed by: Ashlyn
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