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confusingeh
Reviewed @ 1:36 a.m. on 2003-12-22
First Impression= [4/5]
I love layouts with lots of boxes, but yours are overlapping, which is a little annoying.
Layout= [14/15]
This layout was designed by Mad Woman. This has just got to be the cutest, yet simplest layout I have ever seen. It is full of boxes. Everywhere. A box for the number of entry she is at (which is so cute!) and one for the date. Previous, Current and Next have a box and so does the navigator. The only thing that is bothering me, is that the boxes are slightly overlapping on the entry box, making it a little hard to read.
Content= [0/35]
This was the first entry I read and let me tell you--it does not look good. I couldn't stand your language and just your entire style I guess. Drinking and smoking. That sure equals a good time. And likker? Is that suposed to mean liquor? Let me just hope the rest of your entries don't seem like immature jibberish. I was going through your facts and according to this one: 100. I was born on friday the 13th, 1989., you are what? 14 years old. The rest of your, so called facts just seem like facts from a immature spoiled brat. Drinking, smoking, giving blow jobs and kissing college guys? What the hell is wrong with you. This review does not look. If the reviewer isn't happy, then your review will suck ass. Moving on...Why the hell would you want to smoke anyway? To fuck up your lungs? Lung cancer? Throat cancer? Good choices huh? So far, one good thing..you've decided to quit smoking. Hopefully it's for good. Now you're faking sick? Yeah, like we really needed to know. After reading about 10 entries or so, I just get the feeling that you don't write for yourself, as an archive of your life, but it's like you're talking to diaryland about your stuff, like if they really cared. Your, Oh, I'm so bad. I drink beer and give blow jobs attitude is just a cry for help if you ask me. This was almost close enough to a nice entry. You talking about your first new years kiss. You're calling your sister the slut?
Pheww...finished! This is what I got out of reading your last 20 entries. This is just a diary of a 14 year old immature girl who apparently will do anything for attention. Your use of language sucks. There is no emotion what so ever in your diary and all you know how to do is talk about guys and drinking and parties. I want to know where your parents are when you are out party hartying at 14 with booze and smokes. But, there really is nothing more to see here, so move it right along.
Hopefully you won't cry or rant about your score. But if you do, oh well.
Where's the link?= [4/5]
It's linked, but on this page, which isn't on her diary. Don't know what is up with that.
Errors= [0/5]
Learn how to type. Or spell. Or write. And learn how to properly link stuff. Your extras and links page weren't even on the same diary.
Contact= [1/4]
notes
Updates= [8/10]
Misses a few days
Organization= [9/10]
Really organized...love the boxes!!! Consider archiving your older entries.
Extras= [2/5]
facts and cast
Would I come back?= [1/6]
Not even if they paid me.
Additional Comments
Hopefully you will grow up and realize that life isn't just about beer and cigarettes and parties and to see how many guys you can give blow jobs to. If you don't, then you lead a very disappointing life.
Number of entries read= 20
Total: 43/100 Welcome to the Hall of Shame
Reviewed by: ~Nancy~
