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cortney-j
Reviewed @ 4:20 a.m. on 2003-04-25
First Impression= [0/5]
OMG! Black background with brown text...and what's up with that scroll bar color?
Layout= [20/30]
This is a self designed layout, so that's great, but the layout itself, I find it totally ugly. The background is black, the text are brown, the links are dark red and the scroll bar is pink. There's some blur of whiteness on the left side of the layout. The entries are on the right side and the navigator is on top. And below that are the last 5 entries.
After she contacted me through email, I reconsidered to go through her diary again and try to raise her score. I'm glad that she came to me in a civiled manner and emailed me instead of bitching at me in my guestbook or something like that.
She did say that the text is in fact white. I found out the reason why her layout looked so dark. My mom had set the brightness of the computer to an 85%...so when I fixed it, it acutally looked kinda good. I only have one complaint and that's the different colors of the scroll bars....change one to match the other one. And the size of the text. It's too small and the links are too dark. The organization is fairly decent which is good.
Nothing at all...
I like how it's organized.
The entire layout.
It's not really the entire layout, but more like the colors you have on the layout.
Content= [10/20]
I can't stand her writing. She talks like an immature bratty 13 year old. I later found out that she was 13. Go figure. She seems like a stuck up girl who thinks she can get away with anything. They got boring after a while. I was like "I never acted like this when I was 13, so wus up with her." But I did see that she just started her diary, so maybe she'll get used to the concept of writing online and having people and reviewers read it!
After I did read 10 more entries, she still seems like a brat, but aren't we all? She also seems like a cool kid with a good heart. Misunderstood at times. I really could relate to this entry about boys. It actually sounded a little of myself. Kinda eerie. I still find her entries a little bland, but they aren't that bad.
Where's the link= [5/5]
On the links page.
Errors= [4/5]
For some odd reason, at first your archives link took me to an invalid page in geocities.
Contact= [3/4]
guestbook, email, notes
Organization= [10/10]
It is organized.
Updates= [10/10]
Everyday!
Bonus= [5/5]
bio, about johnny, wishlist, blogs, links
Would I be come back?= [1/6]
Oh no!
Additional Thoughts
The layout is ugly and your writing defently has to improve. I suggest you request for a re-review and have someone else review your diary that is not me!
The colors of the layout have to go. And I am positive that your writing will improve.
Number of entries read=9 10
Total: 68/100
Reviewed by: ~Nancy~
