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herhalo
Reviewed @ 4:43 p.m. on 2003-12-16
First Impression= [2/5]
Meh.
Layout= [5/15]
This is a Texy design. It is black and white and grey, with a picture of a girl holding up the entries box. Navigator on the top. "then" and "now" are her previous and next links. The layout doesn't catch my attention.
Obviously you have changed the layout in between my trying to finish your review, lol. Although this one is a self design, it still doesn't catch my attention. Green, orange and black? Makes you kind of think of halloween during the holidays, huh? This is probably my computers problem, but I have to maximize the entire site to be able to get to the scroll bars on the entries page. But, either way, try to make sure, when you do a layout, try your best so that it looks good on different types of computers. Your score stays the same. This layout isn't much better then the first one.
Content= [10/35]
The first thing I read was your bio page, and just out of curiosity, why did you cross out animal cruelity on your "despise" list. I really enjoyed reading your 100 things. We do have some things in common, which I guess is a good thing when you're about to review someone. You kind of know what they are going through and stuff. Now, let me start with the initial part of the review...yay! lol.
I have no idea what this page really means, but, okay! Wow, this entry I really loved. I know how you feel, but why don't you just change your life if you don't like it so far? Try to get some independance. Quit your bitching, at least you have a job. Congrats on the 75%. Wow....I have gotten that feeling also. What girl doesn't like shopping? Oh yeah! A break through about your parents?
I have no idea how to explain what I'm feeling. My mind was going crazy reading your entries. Some were interesting, I'll give you that. But others? I would think stuff like "she complains too much." "what is wrong with her?" "can't she become independant?" You are not what I expected for a 17 year old girl. It is hard to explain. I guess you need to get your ass of the computer chair and do something. Anything.
Where's the link?= [5/5]
Errors= [4/5]
Only a few grammatical ones
Contact= [1/4]
just a guestbook
Updates= [7/10]
Not everyday, but she does update.
Organization=[10/10]
Organized,maybe too organized? lol.
Extras= [5/5]
Check out the extras page.
Would I come back?= [1/6]
No, sorry.
Additional Comments
Good luck with everything. I suggest you wait a month and request for another review from another reviewer on my site.
Number of entries read= 20
Total: 50/100 Welcome to the Hall of Shame
Reviewed by: ~Nancy~
