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hibiscus101
Reviewed @ 9:52 p.m. on 2003-07-14
First Impression = [3/5]
Didn't I review this diary already?
Where's the link? = [5/5]
On the review page.
Layout = [27/30]
Either I've been here before, or I reviewed someone with the same template. Mass confusion! Credit to Alee Designs. Pistachio/teal color for the background, image of a woman sitting on the rocks near the ocean. Ah yes, another diaryland template showing women as depressed and pathetic, my fave! Older page matches, although it has that overlapping text as Alee and Lissy have, and the guestbook is close enough. Navigation below the picture, entry follows.
Eh, nothing really.
Nothing really either. I just don't care for all these templates with sad depressed women...they are always alone or have smeared makeup on their faces. It gets old after a while.
Content = [10/20]
Let's start with writing: no capitalization, tons of slang, ever hear of spellcheck? Some punctuation would be nice. I feel really bad in saying this, because rumor around the 'badmouth reviewers' club is that reviewee's don't like hearing this...but judging by the way you write? I thought you were 13-16. I had no idea you were 20 until I read your profile. Either you are extremely lazy when you type up entries...or you just don't care what people think of you. Either one is good, I assure you, it's just really surprising. What's a little more shocking? I'm not sure if you meant in this entry that you were a reviewer? Or you were just signing up for reviews. I'm wondering, if you are a reviewer and can't keep your own diary in decent order, how can you judge anyone else?
Regardless, back to your content. I really couldn't get into your diary at all. Besides all the errors stated above, you're diary reads much like a daylog, and I didn't find anything passionate or emotional, didn't find anything that caught my attention or made me want to come back. But it's your diary, do it the way you want.
Errors = [5/5]
Nothing in regards to link, I took off for the rest in content.
Contact = [3/4]
Mail, Notes, Guestbook. AOL on profile.
Organization = [8/10]
Necessary links are above the entry, archived nicely. I think you could clean up the links a bit with a link/extra link and maybe a contact page. Or my favorite, dropdown menus...they clean up everything.
Updates = [10/10]
Some skips recently, but who cares...you've had it since June of last year. Good for you. Tons of multiples.
Bonus = [5/5]
Rings, cast, faves, daily reads, about you, quizzes.
Will I be coming back? = [0/6]
Nah, sorry.
Number of entries read = 50
Total: 76/100
Reviewed by: Melody
