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hicksy
Reviewed @ 1:25 p.m. on 2003-06-19
First Impression= [5/5]
Ahh! Pink! Yet, strangely appealing.
Layout= [29/30]
Hmm, Pink. Its a Pink and black (probably previously black and white) picture with a guy and girl spinning with the words, "Forever and always, I'm not gonna let this one go" skirting the edge of the picture. Its got a nice, organized content bar on the right and the entry is on the left. Props to Lissy, If you haven’t heard though she’s closing down.
I like how everything here is nice and organized and how nothing overlaps and becomes confusing. Your little doll is nice, and so is your bunny counter. Lastly, I compliment you on finding a perfect place to but your Imood, which I struggle with regularly. *claps*
This is just me, but I hate those mini-bios on the side, yours isn’t too offensive though. My only other complaint is your daily reads. The scroll area is so incredibly small it takes forever to look through your links there. I suggest you make the box bigger, or make a drop down menu there. Neither of those are too offensive to me, so only one point off.
Content= [5/20]
Your writing is very teenagerish, which makes sense, as you are my age! I do think you should elaborate more on your feeling’s though. In this entry you described how your sister was doing illegal stuff again. Then you “lol”-ed. I felt that if my sister was doing illegal stuff, I’d be kinda mad. I wish you had talked more about that, and not just brushed it off. In the same entry you “lol”-ed in every single paragraph. The occasional “lol” doesn’t bother me, but you do it to the extent that it becomes annoying. You have a lot of very short paragraphs and tend to jump from one subject to another. This too becomes annoying. Since you say “lol” or “haha” or “tehe” in almost every single paragraph at least once, you make it seem like everything’s a joke (like in this entry where you had a cold and laughed about, when you really were suffering!), and nothing is serious. I’m beginning to wonder, are you on a constant sugar high? I feel like you really need to share your emotions more. In this entry you got Prom Queen, great job, but you talk about it like it was no big deal. If I got prom queen I’d be freaking out. I know you must have had a few emotions going through you. That could have been a great place to write about how you feel. This entry had a lot of emotion and I liked it. When you do get around to writing down your emotions, its interesting to read. If you did that more often, it’d be peachy.
Where's the link= [0/5]
Sorry, couldn’t find it anywhere. I don’t think you even mentioned USA reviews anywhere.
Errors= [4/5]
Besides your “lol”-ing and such, everything works.
Contact= [3/4]
Guestbook, e-mail, and notes.
Organization= [10/10]
Very oraganized, everything is easy to find (except our link!)
Updates= [7/10]
Just about every other day, sometimes everyday, sometimes a few days with nothing, it’s pretty crazy.
Bonus= [5/5]
Cast page, rings, link to your favorite shop, bio, mini-bio, little doll, imood, counter, disclaimer.
Would I be come back?= [2/6]
I might, if you start to write more about your feelings.
Additional Thoughts
Your Design is choke full of goodness, but your writing is not. I suggest you work more on your writing, and not your design. If you had written better, your score would be so high!
Number of entries read= About 20 from the past two or three months.
Total: 70/100
Reviewed by: Liz
