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Reviewed @ 7:25 p.m. on 2003-07-11
First Impression = 2/5
Yay, another teen diary to review (note the sarcasm).
Where's the link? = 5/5
On the review page.
Layout = 25/30
Design credit to Alee Designs, although I could've sworn it was a Lissy. Very similar to a Lissy design, right down to the navigation. Hmmm...Wow, even the older page has a common Lissy problem, the text overlaps...hmmm....
Picture of a female cartoon character, the words "this is where i can be myself" written, quite largely I might add, next to it (Hmmm...doesn't Lissy also never capitalize the letter 'I' in her layouts?) Entry below the picture, table to the right of the entry with links, about section, love section (also resembling a Lissy design), and your buddies.
Okay, checked out Lissy's design site, and apparently these two are best friends. I guess that accounts for the templates looking like a ripoff. Personally, I don't like the layout. I've never cared much for the style of this design, regardless of what the image is. Guestbook is blue, not really the same, but it sort of goes.
Nothing really.
Stated above. The design, in general, is overused, even though you have a picture I've never seen before. Your older layout is still in some entries. Since you don't have many, just resave those entries and your new layout should take over.
Content = 5/20
You claim you created this diary to show the 'emotional pain' in your life. I have yet to see any of that. I found this entry interesting, where you talk about all the people begging you not to leave...that was what, 5 entries into your diary?
I'm not sure what annoys me more, reading about you talk about nothing but b-ball camp, or the constant layout changes throughout the diary. You pretty much stick to a daylog, even including times you did things. When you aren't listing off what you did, you are going on about b-ball camp. Actually, I can't say you are 'going on' about it, because your entries are really short.
Okay, we've moved from b-ball camp, to tennis, to writing camp. Some book reviews, more daylogs. What direction are you taking this diary? It's all over the place. Include your 'to-do' list, and I feel like this isn't a diary at all, it should be one big post-it note.
Errors = 5/5
Nadda.
Contact = 4/4
Email, notes, aim, guestbook.
Organization = 6/10
All the links are together in the second column on the top. Previous and next links. Your archive page is worth too much effort. I don't know why you have your older1 page above the bio, it doesn't make much sense to me. After the note that they are after the bio, you should add a 'br' or a 'p' to fix the first entry on the older page. I also suggest adding a link on your older page to your older page, so that those who drop into the older1 page can get back to the main archive.
Updates = 10/10
Looks good so far, but you've only had the diary since the end of June.
Bonus = 2/5
Extras, Link contest.
Will I be coming back? = 0/6
Nope.
What I thought of the diary?
It's not a diary. I'm not sure what it is. You have yet to write one diary-type entry, something with emotion. You claim you cried while writing the cast page, and yet gave no explanations. I'm not even sure why you have a cast page, you didn't talk about anyone on it. I breezed through your entire diary in less than 10 minutes.
Number of entries read = All
Total: 64/100, try adding some emotion, any emotion, into your diary and apply for a re-review in 30 days.
Reviewed by: Melody
