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hottieof06
Reviewed @ 4:40 p.m. on 2004-02-24
First Impression= [5/5]
Aww, I like this layout.
Layout= [13/15]
I've reviewed this layout before and I just absolutely love it! I love the girl girlish feel to it. The butterflies, the ribbons, the pink. Everything. The "previous" and "next" is what I don't like. Too boring.
Content= [0/35]
I'm just on the second entry and your grammar is driving me crazy. It's your not yo. It's were not was, as in, they were talking, not, they was talking. Now reading this entry and still not enjoying myself at all. That ghetto talk is just driving me crazy. And your high school dilemas just don't interest me. This entry just makes me want to yell at you. Why the hell are you bitching cause your boyfriend didn't fork up the $10.00. It's his money and he does what he wants with it. I don't ask my boyfriend for money. Go find youself a job is what you have to do instead of paying attention to every little detail that happens in, not only your life, but your friends lives as well.
I read close to 20 entries. None of which caught my attention. Rantings and rammblings of a 10 grader! Nothing sparked my interest.
Not even when I was a sophomore I wrote stuff that terribly in my diary (not an online one of course, since I didn't have an online one) but...seriously. Who reads your diary? It is not something I would be drawn to or would want to continue reading even after the review. Sorry. You get no sympathy from me here.
Where's the link?= [4/5]
Okay, this is weird. I click on your reviews page and saw the button to USA Reviews. I went to hover it to see if it was linked, and it disappeared!!!! ~sniff sniff~ Well, I'm pleased to say that mine wasn't the only one to disappear. I think it's cause when you hover it, it goes backwards and that might be the reason.
Errors= [0/5]
You forgot to use the
Contact= [3/4]
notes, guestbook and tag board
Updates= [7/10]
A couple of times a week it seems.
Organization= [10/10]
Yup, that it is!
Extras= [5/5]
Extras page! woo hoo!
Would I come back?= [0/6]
Oh. Hell. No.
Additional Comments
Good luck with Willus and with school. You seem narrow minded. Ignorant should be the proper word. I don't know exactly why, that's just the word I got from reading your diary. Maybe you should wait a month and request a review again from us, but not me as your reviewer. It'll just be a waste of time.
Number of entries read= 20
Total: 47/100 Welcome to the Hall of Shame
Reviewed by: ~Nancy~
