We'll Either Make You Or Break You....Do You Have It In You? USA Reviews

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kittyspit
Reviewed @ 10:04 p.m. on 2003-04-06

First Impression = 0/5

Ugh. TyPe LiKe ThIs AnNoYs Me tO nO eNd. Since that was the first thing I saw, your title, your links in that type, my first impression was to run far far away and never look back.

Where's the link? = 0/5

I don't see it anywhere, but then again I can't understand your links, and you obviously didn't read the rules judging by your review request.

Layout = 15/30

I have one word for you. ARCHIVE. Credit for layout goes to Kitty-Rash. It just looks very busy. Maybe if you typed normally, it would look neater.

Scrolls within scrolls also annoy me. You have so much stuff at the top that I have to scroll to your entry. And then there's yet another scroll for your entry, on the rare occasion that you write more than four sentences.

Content = 5/20

Between the numerous spelling errors, the outrageous use of slang, and the two sentence entries, I found this diary extremely difficult to read, let alone understand.

This entry about quitting smoking: I admitted to takin' a few puffs here and there. But I DID try ma very best for 2 enna-half weeks and got all those stupid withdrawal symptoms and shaite. Then had a lil' fite with tzi brat and that ignited me to pick it up again.(Yeah Yeah kill me Im bad..Whut an excuse roite!) is a great example why I can't read your diary any further. It's actually painful.

You get five pity points because at least you know how to turn on a computer and put words on a screen.

Errors = 1/5

Profile link doesn't work. Recommend link doesn't work. Way too much slang for me to understand what your links are actually to.

Contact = 2/4

Guestbook I think, like I said, can't understand your links. Tag board.

Organization = 10/10

Everything is to the right with previous and next above and below each entry. Thanks for the one above, it allowed me to hurry through your diary.

Updates = 8/10

Skips, but a lot of multiples.

Bonus = 0/5

Beats me...I don't understand the language to know what the heck you have going on.

Will I be coming back? = 0/6

Not even if you stuck a hot poker in my eye would I subject myself to that again.

What I thought of the diary?

I'm sure you and your friends enjoy it, as it's a reflection of you and how you are. But from an outsider point of view, it was hard to understand. You hardly write anything, and when you do, the slang is so thick I need my slang to english dictionary just to figure out that you aren't feeling well.

A little more emotion and a lot less slang could make this an interesting read.

Number of entries read = Not going back to count. I dug deep though.

Total: 41/100

Reviewed by: Melody

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