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Reviewed @ 6:48 p.m. on 2003-11-25
First Impression= [2/5]
Hmmmm, stick figures. Short index entry(this one). Not so sure...
Layout= [8/15]
Not too crazy about this one. Lose the dude with the cat...or doll...or whatever it is. I'm not a big fan of centered layouts like this. If you could lose the border, it may not look so. You've only got four colors. Well, three if you don't count the little...thing's eyes. It's made by Blah-Design. It holds its name true. It's very blah.
The scrollbar.
Everything else.
Content= [16/35]
You did this, you did that. Is that really all you did? Wow. Emotion, girl! "We went trick or treating and I was Hugh what's his name". Uh huh. Most of your entries are fairly short. You only write on the highlight of your day. There's not to much say here. Just...work on it. Hard.
Where's the link = [2/5]
Here But it's not a link. Just text.
Contact= [3/4]
Book, email, notes.
Oranization= [10/10]
It's very well organized.
Updates= [2/5]
Yikes. You haven't updated since Nov. 3rd, but did very good the first few weeks of your diary. Ever since you've been rather skippy.
Bonus= [6/5]
Rings, top ten, cast, reviews, trading card, links, and link me.
Would I come back?= [1/6]
No.
Additional Thoughts
Add a little...feeling. If you can't, add a little more in which you did. Talking about one thing per entry that's one paragraph long won't hold reader's interest.
Number of Entries read= 15
Total: 50/100
Reviewed by: Karyssa
