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love-is-pain
Reviewed @ 5:02 p.m. on 2003-02-02
First Impression [5/5]
The crying girl is just simply timeless.
Layout= [15/30]
She designed the layout (good job girl!) But there is quite a few things going on which makes the whole thing seem cluttered. She has the crying girl on top with the words "All Alone and waiting in the darkness for you." Under that it reads:
There is a river of darkness running through me.
No one suspects, no one wants to know. Silent for so long.
The anger rises like black bile and I must spit it out,
Spit it all out.
She then has a fairy under that with some very colorful butterflies on the left hand side down the entire layout from top to bottom. She has a purple fairy next to where her entries go. And a blue one on the other side which seems cute. Then she has all these other pictures going on. Some are links to other places and some aren't and you can't tell which is which unless you put the cursor above the design and look down the page where it tells you what website or page that link leads to. Then, instead of putting her reviews on one page and linking that page to the navigator, instead, she has all the links at the bottom which makes it look cluttered more so then what it already seems. I really liked everything on this layout except for the links and designs she has after her entries (like the book design and all those other pics and links the way you have them)
I do like the fact that you have 2 different pictures. One on your layout and a different one on your older entries layout! Oh and you don't have any "next" nor "previous" links to get to the next entry. I had to go back to the archives every time I wanted to read another entry.
Content= [10/20]
Her entries are just so damn long that after a while you get bored of them and just want to move on. She is rather depressing in the entries I've read. She does know how to express herself and her writing in just unbelievable.
You just don't be rude as shit to an adult that you've only just met. I mean, wait until you know someone before you decide they don't deserve your respect that comment just cracked me up!
Where's the link= [5/5]
It's right on the layout!
Errors= [5/5]
Believe it or not....I didn't find any errors!
Contact= [1/4]
All I found was an email address.
Organization= [0/10]
Don't get me started here again (check up on the layout part) The older entries just seems like a total mess. You have some links on the top, then that huge notify list thingy that is rather annoying, THEN we get to the entries. After that you have some rings you have joined which yeah, you should add them to just one entry and link that page onto the navigator.
Updates= [5/10]
She updates but leaves gaps in between each entry.
Bonus= [5/5]
rings, quizzes, links, love-is-pain is also a public diary!
Will I be coming back?= [2/6]
I don't think so.
What I thought of the diary?
The layout is pretty messy. You could take a suggestion and instead of adding all those extra designs as links, you can simply use the butterflies on the side to link back to your older entries and your email address and other stuff like that. Some entries were good, but all of them were just so damn long!
Number of entries read=7
Total: 53/100
Reviewed by: Nancy
