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Reviewed @ 12:59 p.m. on 2003-11-14
First Impression= [1/5]
Ok, whoa. Whoa, whoa, and whoa again! The first impression I got was, "Un-professionality" if that's a word. I wanted to run away. I mean literally, run away from the computer! It reminded me of my first days of HTML. I also couldn't decide which was your diary title: what you have on the layout, or what you have the page titled, so I chose the page title.
Layout= [1/15]
Hate to be harsh, but this layout has got to go. And fast! The pink and green don't match. The New Times Roman is just plain boring. It's a little cluttered at the bottom. The scrollbar is just plain yuck! You have to let go of that pink hover color. It hurts my eyes trying to stare at those links. The burgandy is ok, but not the pink. The monkey? No. The short description, date, and time are too far away from the entry. The eyes would make a better banner if you have a Gold membership. You did a good job on the eyebrows, though. Your music player is squished up, and doesn't belong right above the entries. Gosh, do you ever even look at your diary? I could've given you a higher score on a Diaryland template! A point for creativity...and trying.
None.
Everything.
Content= [18/35]
I got the feeling you were having a sort of trial in life. Half the time you're talking about "you". Who's you? You have a cast page, but there's no "you". That's confusing. You got all freaked out someone taking off their buddy list? Or am I mistaken? You go on and on about how someone hurt you. Again, "you" hurt you. Who the heck is "you". You don't go into detail, you just go on and on, "how could you?...such a horrible secret...you think i hurt you?". Stuff like that. You're lost and you know it. Deep down you know you shouldn't be where you are. Like, you could've done better. That's what I got from this diary. Lots and lots of emotion, though.
Where's the Link= [5/5]
On your review page.
Errors= [2/5]
No capitalization. Every sentence starts with a lower-case letter! I learned how to capitalize in pre-school, what about you? Your link to USA Reviews also leads to the rules page. Is that on purpose?
Contact= [4/4]
AIM, YIM, gbook, notes, and email.
Organization= [8/10]
It's fairly organized. Except things are out of place, like the short description and music. I didn't get lost.
Updates= [7/10]
Recently you've been updating everyday, several times a day, but you missed two or three days in a row several times.
Bonus= [5/5]
Comments, imood, 102 things, cast, and links.
Will I be back?= [0/6]
No.
Additional Thoughts
Change the layout for the sake of onlookers.
Number of entries read= 21
Total: 51/100
Reviewed by: Karyssa
