We'll Either Make You Or Break You....Do You Have It In You? USA Reviews

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maryg213
Reviewed @ 1:42 a.m. on 2003-12-24

happiness is a warm gun

First Impression= [3/5]

Bleh. I like the gun and the saying, all else could go.

Layout= [0/15]

This is a Migraine Design and I can see why. The ulgy layout is giving me a headache. It should have stopped right at the gun and the wording, but, no. It continues all the way down and then has a stupid looking guy holding the gun. Now, what is up with that? The links are terribly placed there with red text. I have to maximise the entire thing to view it properly. This is annoying and I haven't even started! Then you have like 10 entries in one page? I hate when people do that. ::takes deep breath and moves on with the review::

Content= [5/35]

I have now read up to December 7. The second I started reading, I felt like English wasn't your first language. Then you started talking about Guatemala and Venezuela (I think it was). Maybe you are from there? Or around there? But, you are at Oregon State University. I was actually thinking of going there.

Well, up to now, your entries have bored me. You write emotionless and seem to leave things half way done. Like, you won't go into details. It is very annoying, especially since I am reviewing your diary, I want to know all and I'm not getting that from you.

I noticed that you had the lyrics posted of "Mala Gente" I honeslty have no clue who sings that song, but I always hear it on the radio...It kicks ass.

But, your entire diary bored me. You have entries with only a sentence in them saying jibberish. Is stuff like that really necessary for a diary? For everyone to read? I sure didn't like reading it so I am pretty positive nobody else would like to read those entires where you have that one sentence jibberish written on them.

Where's the link?= [4/5]

I did find the link. Right on the layout, but it says "REVIEW" and I figured it would take me to the section where she has her reviews and all, but it leads me to my review site. Maybe you should change that to USA Reviews or something.

Errors= [3/5]

Grammar and use of language where it doesn't belong.

Contact= [3/4]

email, aim, guestbook

Updates= [5/10]

Whenever she feels like it aparently

Organization= [7/10]

I had to maximise it completely so that the layout could look good. But, the links are at the bottom. Fairly organized I can say.

Extras= [4/5]

photos, about, scheduele and reads

Would I come back?= [1/6]

No way.

Additional Comments

It is a miracle that I was able to stay awake to get to this part of the review.

Number of entries read= 24

Total: 35/100 Welcome to the Hall of Shame

Reviewed by: ~Nancy~

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