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Reviewed @ 11:05 a.m. on 2003-07-16
First Impression= [5/5]
Ahh, summer days spent swimming.
Layout= [30/30]
It's a background picture of a person swimming. The entry box is on the left with the links to the left. Text and links are light blue. Props to LOTR Designs.
Likes- I like nearly everything about this layout. I usually don't like the small entry boxes that scroll, but you pull yours off by putting the before and after links below the scrolly box. Besides the fact that everything is organized and neat, I really like the picture. The colors range between blue and white with some black, so its not to blue, or too white, or too solid. It's just fun to look at. I think its cool that even though you don't have an exactly matching guestbook, it still has a picture/colors with the same watery theme.
Dislikes-The text color is a little hard to read. I'm not really sure if it would even be beneficial to make it darker or lighter, because you've probably played around with the font color before, and this was the best thing you came up with.
Content= [19/20]
Before I go on about your writing, let me say that I like how you start every name of the entry with "On ....." I think this is creative, and it makes it easier for you to come up with entry titles. From your first entry, this isn't your first diary. This entry reminded me of myself! I have spent many a day staring at the guy I like, and then ending up hanging out with him all day. I wish we had dance classes! Your birthday entry was very good and showed you growing up. I know that back in the day, my birthday was a HUGE deal. Now, its not. Also in that entry I found out your Norwegian! You have great English! I've noticed that lots of your entries are daylogs with feelings. That's good. Many people ramble on about what they did that day without thinking about how that affected them. If you do have a normal daylog, it's short, so I haven't gotten bored. Your "happy daze" entry made me laugh. You were just kind of rambling on about random happiness and it was funny. I agree with you about daffodils. I know your Norwegian, but this entry irked me. The whole conversation was in a language I can't even send through a translator on the internet! Your death entry wins the award for deepest entry. I loved your airplane entry, mostly because my favorite Uncle is a pilot. Just to let you know, your not a "narcissist bitch." I connected a lot with your diary because I'm about your age. I think other, older people might not like it as much.
Where's the link= [5/5]
On the Extra's page.
Errors= [3/5]
Some spelling, capitalization, and grammar ever now and then.
Contact= [4/4]
Guestbook, e-mail, notes, guestmap.
Organization= [8/10]
It's mostly good, your extra's page is a mess and your older's could be archived.
Updates= [8/10]
Some skips, some multiples, 8 out of 10.
Bonus= [4/5]
Mooph's diary, 30 things about you, reviews, rings.
Will I be coming back?= [6/6]
Yes, Yes I am.
What I thought of the diary?
It's cool to read a diary from somewhere where they don't speak English. Especially since your my age.
Number of entries read = All, All, All.
Total: 92/100
Reviewed by: Liz
