We'll Either Make You Or Break You....Do You Have It In You? USA Reviews

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nocry4help
Reviewed @ 12:33 a.m. on 2003-12-07

x Choose. Your. Poison. x

First Impression= [4/5]

Black and green? Okay!

Layout= [13/15]

I do have to congratulate you for making your own layout! I guess it takes guts to do so! lol. It really didn't appeal to me as much. It is black with green and a picture of a girl on top. Opps, sorry, maybe a drawing of a girl. The entry is in the middle. Navigator on one side and last entries and quotes on the other. The layout does look kind of huge for my monitor. I do like the font and when you hover them. It does seem cool. I love the scrolling quote. I can feel that this diary is going to be some what different.

Content= [35/35]

I started off with this entry. It was a good poem. But, it did kind of freak me out a little with the gun part at the end. Okay, not this one freaked me out. A poem about cutting yourself? I honestly hope that they are just poems and that you don't actually do crazy shit like that. ~Yay~ You're going to see Ian! You sounded pretty excited! Loved the random ranting on the teachers. I have a professor like your spanish teacher! OMG! Those are the worse! Now this was a great poem! Awww! That doesn't sound corny at all. I am glad that you are finally together with Ian again! WOW! And I mean it. You know how to use the words. So here I stand...My mind in one hand, My heart in the other... I do the same thing at the computer lab in the university. "Oh yeah! I'm looking up some information!! lol"

I have to say that I did enjoy myself reading your diary. I thought, cause of the layout, you would be some punk kid who pierces their eyelids to make a statement. But I was very pleased to find out that you are a junior in high school who is madly, deeply in love with Ian. I really loved reading those entries. Being in love is so wonderful.

I did enjoy the poems. I am not usually into poems that aren't written by me (does that seem...shoot! I forgot the word! lol) But, after a while, every new entry would be another new poem and I would be "No, not another one!" No offense. They were great, but I wanted to read more of you. I usually don't like to go too far back in reviewing, cause I want to read how the person is now. I didn't find too many "personal" entries.

But, you are a good writter! I did enjoy myself. So, keep up the good work.

Where's the link?= [5/5]

Here.

Errors= [5/5]

Didn't find any...so ~yay!~

Contact= [4/4]

guestbook, notes, email, aim

Updates= [10/10]

So far so good for the month of December

Organization= [9/10]

It does seem a little big and the quotes kind of look a little messy. Try adding those to a entry page.

Extras= [5/5]

Here.

Would I come back?= [7/6]

Oh yeah. You are going on my favorites list when I get a chance to add you! Hopefully soon!

Additional Comments

Keep up the good work and good luck with you and Ian in the future.

Number of entries read= 21

Total: 97/100 Welcome to the Hall of Fame!

Reviewed by: ~Nancy~

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