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notme2000
Reviewed @ 10:14 p.m. on 2003-07-21
First Impression = [4/5]
My first impression was that of frustration. I couldn't view your diary at all, Fortune City images plagued the background. Two reboots later, I decided to switch computers.
Where's the link? = [2/5]
After a massive manhunt for it, I checked the request. It's not exactly on the older page, but it's within the older older pages...in other words? Buried.
Layout = [25/30]
I will assume self design. Background graphic of a cartoon character (more like charcoal drawing) sitting in the rain. Links below and above, to the left, and when you right click. Older pages match, guestbook somewhat matches.
It's very original.
This is me complaining, pay no attention. I hate the right click for navigation. I hate how your guestbook falls under geocities, causing all these pop-ups for me when I view it. Because the background image is fixed and large, if my browser isn't maxed, I can't see it at all. I think if just your entry scrolled and not all the links, it might be a little bit less annoying.
Content = [17/20]
You and I are a lot alike when it comes to thunderstorms. I do the exact same thing. I can also relate to the tattoo issue. I have 11...trust me, I'm picky! I have a friend in New Orleans that does this type of contact lenses, he is always having problems with eye doctors over his work. Explain to me what YTV is, please? I've been trying to find Fear again for the longest time, I love that show!
Errors = [5/5]
There is too much to go through, I will assume it all works.
Contact = [2/4]
Guestbook on the main page, right click for comments. Notes are turned on, but don't see a link for them. MSN on profile.
Organization = [7/10]
Like I said under layout, it's a little too much for me. Right clicking is annoying, the buried links on your older older pages are annoying, and the main links you have are quite limited. Archived nicely though.
Updates = [10/10]
Who cares when you update, you have over 600 entries. Full points.
Bonus = [3/5]
I'm sure they are buried in here somewhere. The only ones I can see when I right click are Cast, Bio, and Photo's.
Will I be coming back? = [3/6]
That's a maybe at this time.
What I thought of the diary?
For the most part you write really well. Some of your entries seem to drag on because of infrequent paragraph breaks, but usually they are pretty interesting. You have a few daylogs in there which tend to get boring, but then you run off into philisophical debates which is refreshing. I say just work on the template a bit more, or leave everything as is...it's your diary, keep it as you want.
Number of entries read = Hmm...30 maybe?
Total: 78/100
Reviewed by: Melody
