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Reviewed @ 11:12 p.m. on 2003-06-28
Since this is a re-review, I'm only going to review you based on your entries since your previous review on May 8th.
First Impression = [4/5]
Wow that's a lot of pink.
Where's the link? = [5/5]
On the reviews page.
Layout = [29/30]
Butterfly layout by Lissy. Light pink background, butterfly and swirl graphics are a darker pink. Text is black. Older page matches. Guestbook has a black background with pink highlights...image doesn't work?
The colors are easy on the eyes. The script saying "Butterfly Dreams" on the left and "take these broken wings" on the right look nice, they add a nice touch to the layout. I also like the firework effect when I click my mouse on the page.
The text on the bottom of the screen that scrolls "Broken wings and butterfly dreams..." It gets annoying after a while, and takes away from me seeing the url's for links.
I don't know what this is about, but your bottom scrollbar scrolls to the right FOREVER!
Content = [20/20]
The first entry I read was this one, which was very well written. I'm wondering why I gave you such a bad score before...I refuse to read your older review until I get through this one, so I'll check later. Sounds like you are being very adult about the situation, good for you! This was also a very well written entry. Some good discoveries about yourself and men in general.
The doctor visit made me raise an eyebrow...he really shouldn't have said half the things he said to you! Talk about crossing the line! At least you got a good laugh at it and agreed with the things he said (hopefully not the part about sleeping with whoever you want!). The next entry, about sex, was great. I completely agree with everything you said, some great insights!
Sorry to hear about your Grandfather, but I agree with your feelings about bodies. I couldn't bring myself to kiss my father's body when he died. It's not really him, so I guess, to me, kissing the body is pointless. I completely related to what you said, my grandparents died very close to each other as well.
My favorite quote from your diary? ...love is made of simplicity, taken from this entry. As far as Jeff not telling Jenn about you, I agree with you. She needs to know, and she needs to know now. Your entry about rape was very powerful.
Errors = [5/5]
I didn't see any, except for the scrollbar issue stated above.
Contact = [4/4]
Email, notes, guestbook, AIM.
Organization = [10/10]
Navigation to the right of the entry. Older entries are archived nicely.
Updates = [8/10]
A few skips here and there.
Bonus = [5/5]
Cast, rings, quizzes, extras, counter, currently online, current mood.
Will I be coming back? = [6/6]
You know what? Yeah, I think I will. In fact, as soon as I get around to it, I'm going to add you to my favorites.
What I thought of the diary?
I went back and read my original review. After reading the comments about your layout and entries at the time, I remembered your diary. The long paragraphs and layout took away from it at the time...
But now, your diary is amazing. I can see you really took your reviews to heart and worked on making your diary that much better. Your words are amazing, inspiring, full of insight, and absolutely beautiful. You break up your entries into paragraphs now, removed a lot of clutter, organized the entire thing, changed your layout...you really did a complete overhaul!
Number of entries read = From May 8th to present.
Total: 96/100, welcome to the Hall of Fame.
Reviewed by: Melody
