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Reviewed @ 1:38 p.m. on 2003-12-18
First Impression= [5/5]
Oooh yeah baby. The 7 sins.
Layout= [5/15]
The design is from here. The only thing that caught my attention here was the image. The entire navigator and entry box just seems huge. I am not liking it one bit. I never really mention the type of font in diaries, but I am not liking this font. It just looks weird I guess.
Content= [35/35]
The story was amusing. That was also the first entry I read and so far so good. I really enjoyed this entry about your first driving experience in snow. It just cracked me up. And about doing homework for another class in one class...I have been there and I know what you're talking about. I feel the same way about those types of layouts. I usually give them a low score since they annoy the hell out of me. I know I shouldn't have been cracking up about your ummmm, uuuuuuhhhh, mmmmm, date, but it just did. I am totally enjoying your diary up to now. And I have no idea why it would take a guy 3 hours to shave? a beret, but okay then! lol...Pay no attention to any reviews you have gotten. It is just the opinion of one person and that's all. Go with your feelings. If it feels right, then it usually is. I started reading your first entries...maybe your first 5. They just bored the hell out of me. But, hey, they are your old entries. My old, very old entries suck ass.
I honestly enjoyed your diary. It made me laugh and it even got me excited when Gregg :::omg::: kissed you. It reminds me of when I was in high school and the hormones and having a boyfriend and stuff like that is all crazy.
Don't ever change your writting for anybody. Just write what you feel and screw the rest. If you're emotional that day, so be it. If you're not, screw them. I happen to like reading about love and all the butterflies.
Where's the link?= [5/5]
On the reviews page.
Errors= [3/5]
One is on the reviews page, I noticed that you didn't add the <*br*> to some of the reviews. About after reading 6 of your entries, I realized that you don't capitalize anything. I'm not taking any points away for it though, since it doesn't annoy me, hell, I didn't even realize it until so many entries read, which was kind of silly. I am going to take off a point for some internet lingo, I guess, or spelling tickets like tix and stuff like that.
Contact= [4/4]
guestbook, notes, email, aim.
Updates= [9/10]
Fairly okay in her updates.
Organization=[9/10]
It is organized, but the big boxes are annoying.
Extras= [5/5]
Here's her page
Would I come back?= [7/6]
I am adding you to my favorites so...oh yeah! I will be back!
Additional Comments
I have never really told anybody to change their layout, but, I am advicing you to or to just adjust the size of the boxes. And remember, you scored full points on your writting. The layout isn't half has important as the content.
Number of entries read= 25
Total: 87/100
Reviewed by: ~Nancy~
