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plastikcharm
Reviewed @ 4:42 p.m. on 2003-02-02

World of oblivion and dreams...

First Impression [4/5]

Well, when I first saw the image, I thought it was a bit bland, but I did like the rest of the layout. Black and white is a classic, and it's very neat.

Layout= [28/30]

A cute, though a bit solemn layout from PS. I really liked it, especially the way the tables on the left overlap the image. It's very organized, simple, and understated. Only that one point off because something about the image just didn't really sit well with me. A bit dull or unreadable. Though that is just my opinion. And after a while, the black and white gets really dull. Maybe add a bit of color. It doesn't need to be a lot, just something to keep the reader interested.

Content= [23/25]

Some short entries, some long, all very sweet and from the heart. Nice balance. You're not too depressed, and not too euphoric...or if you are, you don't go overboard. But sometimes, you might need to go a bit overboard to grab your reader's attention from the get-go; sometimes your entries are a little boring. You express yourself really well, and I could really relate to a lot of what you were saying.

Errors= [3/5]

Every now and then, a grammer or spelling mistake, no big deal. And some internet abbrieviations. But still, no big deal.

Contact= [1/4]

Only notes, as far as I can tell.

Organization= [10/10]

Very nice.

Updates= [9/10]

Everyday, with only a few missed days in the past.

Bonus= [2/5]

Cast, rings.

Will I be coming back?= [5/6]

Probably, if I have the time. I really enjoyed reading your diary.

What I thought of the diary?

I could really relate to things you said here, here, and here. I find that a lot of what you say sounded familiar to what I often feel. Your emotions about meeting his eyes in the hallway really seemed like a mirror image of incidents I had with a certain guy. I know how you feel. Your writing is very good, balancing dramatic and emotional and realism. Keep it up, you're doing well by me.

Total:92/100

Reviewed by: Heather