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prettykay
Reviewed @ 7:55 p.m. on 2003-06-14
First Impression = 5/5
You changed your layout since I was last here...
Where's the link? = 5/5
Under views.
Layout = 35/30
Self design. White background, pink highlights and links, black text. Picture of a couple on the beach almost kissing in the top left corner. Older page matches, guestbook matches. Bonus points for such a beautiful self design.
It's organized. Colors work well together. I love how the guestbook matches, not too many people do that on self designs.
The size. I have to maximize my browser to see the entire layout.
Content = 20/20
Good for you about your thoughts on sex. I think a lot of teens look at it completely different, and trust me, they will regret it later in life. Stick to your morals, you'll feel better about yourself. Sorry to hear about prom. Sounds like Scott has some serious anger issues. It may seem like the biggest deal right now, but trust me...I don't even remember my prom anymore, ten years later. This entry, taken from your diary-x diary, is a very powerful entry. And yes, only you know why...and I understand being cryptic sometimes, I do it too.
As far as Scott joining the Navy, try not to be so hard on him for it. The military would be a great place for him to grow up, learn some discipline, get away from the pot, and basically grow up. Looks like he changed to the Air Force, which I was in. It's not that bad...basic for the Air Force is the shortest, and he'll learn a lot. And in response to your P.S., I'm working on it!
I am completely in awe over your diary. This is the first diary I've read in a while that I was this hooked this quickly. I love how you start off with a random quote. I love your descriptions here and there about nature and what it's like outside. I love your insight, your emotion, the way even your daylog entries come across as poetry. I'm hooked.
Errors = 5/5
On some of your earlier entries, your current and archive page links aren't htmled correctly. Looks like you're trying to get your new template throughout the diary, good for you! Still a few entries that have the old template, just resave them and they'll change.
Contact = 3/4
Email, guestbook, notes.
Organization = 10/10
All the links are to the right of the entry. For me, I had to maximize my browser to see them.
Updates = 7/10
Some skips since you started in April.
Bonus = 5/5
Cast, rings, love, links, about.
Will I be coming back? = 6/6
I'm adding you to my faves. It's that good.
What I thought of the diary?
What more can I say? I have nothing against teen diaries, but usually I can't relate, or their writing is odd to me, because of my age. But yours is a great read regardless of age. Your writing is amazing, you have a real talent for it, although I'm not sure you realize it. I'd love to see you take a stab at some poetry.
Number of entries read = All
Total: 101/100, welcome to the Hall of Fame!
Reviewed by: Melody
