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Reviewed @ 1:09 p.m. on 2003-07-22
First Impression = [2/5]
I am going to hate this diary.
Where's the link? = [4/5]
Under Broken, duh.
Layout = [19/30]
Credit to Daisy Designs or NNDesign, not sure which since you link them both. I've seen this picture used at other design sites. Dark picture of a woman crying with mascara running down her face. White text on dark purple background with blue links. Your older page is a different layout, a picture of a piece of wood with the words "have you ever seen the end because if you have you know what pain is" burnt into it. Not sure about the guestbook, I'm sure it doesn't match though. At this time, guestbooks aren't working.
None of it, really, except it's not a diaryland template.
Again I say layouts like this give women a bad name. Using a Lucida Console font on a diary just seems wrong somehow. It doesn't look nice. I'll get into your links later. Double scroll and invisible scroll...the two things I hate the most on this template.
Content = [10/20]
What's not surprising: you're almost 15 (I think) and depressed. You are searching desperately for love and aren't getting it. You enjoy pain, writing dark poetry, and basically are confused about life. Well guess what? Welcome to being a teenager. You'll get over it in 10 years, trust me. And all ones that you think are 'the one' and that you 'cant live without'...you won't even remember their names. The constant depressing poetry and IM conversations weren't interesting, and for the most part all your other entries really didn't say much. Sex doesn't turn you on anymore? Poor teenager who's no longer a virgin now wonders why people are using her for sex. Gee, wonder why.
Errors = [4/5]
Capitalization, grammar, the basics that you choose to sometime ignore.
Contact = [2/4]
Email, notes, guestbook only on older page.
Organization = [6/10]
Organization isn't too bad, you really need to archive. Your link names don't fit the link at all, leads to confusion. They seem unorganized the way you have them at the top of the page on your index and at the bottom of the page on your older.
Updates = [5/10]
What updates? You have huge gaps.
Bonus = [0/5]
There are quizzes and rings in the diary, but no links to them.
Will I be coming back? = [0/6]
No, I've already done the depressed teen thing 13 years ago, no reason to relive it.
What I thought of the diary?
It's actually fairly typical. There are some people your age that write well beyond their years, and then there are those that write all about how depressed they are and little else. You are the depressed one. Even your template is depressing. Apparently there is nothing good in your life to write about. And of course this is the hardest time of your life, and no one understands, and blah blah blah...try to lighten up.
Number of entries read = All
Total: 52/100, you're more than welcome to apply for a re-review in 30 days or more. You can bring the score up with a nicer template, some bonus stuff, more frequent updates, better organization, and maybe some capitalization here and there. Don't take your reviews so personally, they are only some strangers opinion.
Reviewed by: Melody
