We'll Either Make You Or Break You....Do You Have It In You? USA Reviews

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ransgirl15
Reviewed @ 12:26 p.m. on 2003-06-15

---> I Will Let You Down. I Will Make You Hurt <---

First Impression= [5/5]

I remember reviewing this layout before and absolutley loving it!

Layout= [30/30]

This layout was made at Pixel Scripts. I really love this layout. The main background color is black. The text is white, links are red, navigator is red, scroll bar is black and red. Theres a picture on top of a girl licking the stem of a rose. At the bottom of the picture it reads "I will let you down. I will make you hurt."

Likes

The image. I just love it. And I like how the text is big.

Dislikes

Nothing at all!

Content= [18/20]

Right after I read your cast page to see who's who in your life, I hopped over to this page to see who you were. The way you have that page is just brilliant. You have links to your hates and loves, lyrics and some other goodies. I loved that! OMG! I have to congratulate you on that well selection you have there on your Top 100 Songs. There are some that I haven't heard in a while link "We will rock you" by 5ive, West Side Story by LFO, Hero by Enrique Iglesias, My Way by Limp Bizkit. I can say that there can be at least 20 from the 100 songs that I have never heard (mostly from Aaron Carter) but I just loved that list...okay...moving on...! lol....

I totally felt the same way in junior high school like the way your describing here. Where everybody would have someone to kiss and hold and you'd just be at the side lines watching. I almost cried cuz I knew exactly how that feels and I hate to know that there are other people going through that also.

I remember thinking this too. How when your 8 you want to be 16 to be able to drive, 18 to be able to move out and go to college and whatever. Now that I'm 20, I just wish I was 18 again. So, don't want to rush it that much girl. Your time will come so enjoy as much as you can of today and forget that much about the future, cuz it will come. And yes, when your 24, you will wish that you were 19 again! That's just how the world works! lol...

My dad gave me that talk also. He didn't want me to "go away" for college. He also told me the same thing you dad told you about the advantages of being bilingual. Like who cares. If you want to be a fashion designer, then good luck and I hope to be wearing your clothes sometime in the future. Your dad will come around, so don't worry about it.

Now, imagine all the things you could do if you weren't afraid. I know I can do a lot if I wasn't. Can you? Really, what do you have to loose? Maybe a dream come true if you weren't afraid.

And I know how you feel where you talk about this.

I loved the entries. Bascially because they just reminded me so much when I was that age (I'm guessing she's in junior high cuz of what she said in this entry and this entry.) I brought back memories which was good. Then it was also bad in some parts. She writes with a lot of emotion. She seems to love her friends since she's always talking about them in her diary.

But I did dislike the fact that some entries were just one big, very long entry. I hate reading entries like that. Remember to leave a paragraph every once in a while so you won't bore your readers to death. Those long entries bored me since I got the feeling you were going to go on and on and on talking about the same thing.

I don't know if your most recent entries are poems or what, but you did start to get a little rebelious, which is never a good thing. Calm yourself down a little.

But other then that, it's a good read if your someone my age that wants to go back to what it felt like being Dulce's age again.

Where's the link= [5/5]

On this page. And she used a button...I'm so proud! lol...

Errors= [4/5]

Your "photos" link doesn't work.

Contact= [4/4]

tag board, email, guestbook, notes. I love how she has the notes and guestbook in the layout. That you just sign there and click away. It's so cute!

Organization= [10/10]

Yup, it's organized.

Updates= [10/10]

Everyday! Good job girl!

Bonus= [5/5]

rings, cast, reviews, extra, it's all about me, quizzes, surveys, photos, link me

Would I be come back?= [6/6]

Oh hell yeah!

Additional Thoughts

This diary is defently a winner. I loved the layout and the writing. Keep up the good work and good luck with everything.

Number of entries read=38

Total: 97/100 Welcome to the Hall of Fame

Reviewed by: ~Nancy~

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