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romeo73401
Reviewed @ 10:11 a.m. on 2003-06-30
First Impression= [5/5]
Cool! I like the layout!
Layout= [28/30]
This layout is pretty cool. I’m not a huge fan of the font, but I like the image – it’s nice and clear. I also like the poems/lyric thing. Imood is at the bottom, out of the way, and the links are right there for you to notice. All in all, it’s really very good. Basic HTMl credited to Alee Designs.
Content= [18/20]
First off, I liked how you signed each entry with that cool “Romeo” graphic. As I said in my last review, I’m loving the graffiti font!
I really liked this entry, in which you rejected that “plenty more fish in the sea” thing and compared love to a highway instead. After thinking about it, it made me realize that your version actually made a lot more sense.
I could also relate to this entry because it was a lot the same as me – I don’t really talk to my parents about that stuff, I just learned it and picked up things.
One reason I enjoyed your diary was because you’re a guy. Since I’m a girl, I don’t know what guys are thinking. So it was cool to read your diary and get somewhat of the jist of how guys think, how they feel about crushes, etc. That is a good element that draws readers of the female gender in.
I loved this entry. It was so touching. Was that a true story? I assume not, since you’re 16 and the story talks about after high school. But is it based on you? And the ending is sad – if only the guy could’ve known she felt the same way! Did you write it yourself? If you did, bravo! I assume you did since you didn’t link anyone back!
But I was a bit overwhelmed by all of the surveys. A few is okay, but all of those, like several in a row, were just a bit much for me. There were lots of repeated questions and they got old pretty easily.
I only got bored a couple of times, but that was because I had some distractions. Your whole diary was all in all pretty good.
Where's the link= [5/5]
Right on the reviews page!
Errors= [5/5]
None that I could see.
Contact= [5/4]
Email, book, notes, MSN, Yahoo, AIM. Bonus point.
Organization= [11/10]
Very good. You archived all your entries, good job! Extra point because you even archived your surveys, cast page, etc.
Updates= [7/10]
Several days skipped with no multiples.
Bonus= [9/5]
P.O.M, S.O.M, wishlist, profile, cast, surveys, rings, reviews, quizzes, poem diary, site, graphics.
Will I be coming back?= [5/6]
90% chance I would.
What I thought of the diary?
With an improvement or two you could get a 100!
Number of entries read = all of June’s
Total: 98/100 ~ Welcome to the Hall of Fame!
Reviewed by: Caitlin.
