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jaguar7482 - 2004-10-24
webmiztris - 2004-10-24
faint-iris - 2004-08-29
shoot-down - 2004-08-27
dc3caliboi - 2004-08-27
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Reviewed @ 10:37 a.m. on 2004-03-13
First Impression= [5/5]
Cuuute!
Layout= [15/15]
I like the yellow theme with the moth-butterfly thing. It’s very cute! Credited to Pieces of You.
Content= [25/35]
I was kind of bored. Sure, it’s what you’re feeling and I respect that.
But, I was still bored. I appreciated some of the insights about death and stuff, and I think it’s great that you’re working through it. It’s never easy, stuff like that.
The POY entry was great. I feel like that a lot too – I really would like my ever-so-slightly rose tinted glasses back.
Where's the link= [6/5]
All over. :) we like that!
Errors= [4/5]
Your ‘reviews’ link doesn’t work. Other than that, you’re apostrophies are sometimes missing, and 'I' needs to be capitalized ;)
Contact= [4/4]
Guestbook, notes, and email. Plenty of contact info.
Organization= [9/10]
Well laid out, very easy to get around.
Updates= [9/10]
Usually every few days. Good pattern.
Bonus= [3/5]
Because I like the picture.
Would I be come back?= [3/6]
Most likely not.
Additional Thoughts
A lot of your sentences are run on, with lots of commas and such. That’s bad grammar, and also kind of hard to read through. Try cutting down on the number of commas, make one really long sentence into two, that sort of thing.
Number of entries read= All of them. 27, I think.
Total: 79/100
Reviewed by: Sarah
