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stumblebee
Reviewed @ 12:28 a.m. on 2003-03-21
First Impression= [5/5]
Cute, very original,and I love how the design fits the username.
Layout= [27/30]
I love it, very original, and designed by you, so that gets you mad props.
The only thing I didn't like was how the archive page was set up with the image inbetween the different archived lists. Honestly, I am not sure even why I don't like it, but it seems a little cluttered to me.
Content= [16/20]
My first impression was that your entries were a little on the long side, and that lost my attention real quick. I would get halfway through a entry and wonder where it was going, and skim the rest till I got to the end, to wrap it all up. There's a 'rule' by George Orwell thats says "If it's possible to cut a word out, always cut it out." [Thats from "Politics and the English language", for anyone interested lol] Diaries are for your pleasure, and sometimes for the entertainment of others, so really, you should write what you want, how you want to, but just as a tip, watch how long your entries go.
Something I liked was the way in some entries, I could relate to what you were saying. "She's found her a good ol' preacher boy, and we still have to threaten you with your education just to get you in church, you little heathen!" " I honestly think my mother has said the exact same thing to me before....
Also, another thing that I must give you kudo's for, is that your writing seems to be developing for the better over time. In some of the earlier entries, I felt like things were a little dry, that I wasn't really seeing you in your writing. It seemed like just a overview of your daily going on's, but in the more recent entries, such as this one. [on a side note, my english prof. is the exact same way. "Your supposed to have 2 hours of homework for every hour in class, well this is a three hour class!"] This was also a good one.
One last thing on content, I love your review section!
Where's the link= [5/5]
On the links page. Simple enough.
Errors= [5/5]
None that I saw.
Contact= [3/4]
email, guestbook, notes
Organization= [10/10]
I had no problem with anything.
Updates= [8/10]
A few gaps in March, like you notes, but no big deal, everyone gets busy.
Bonus= [2/5]
This one was kinda rough, with just the cast and links, but really, I don't think your diary needs a ton of extra's to support it.
Will I be coming back?= [4/6]
I am honestly not sure, the length of the entries kind of lost my attention, but I really like you as a person from what I've seen. So, it's a maybe on this one.
What I thought of the diary?
I pretty much summed it up already, but I loved the layout,and the username. I enjoyed reading about you, as a person, but it was a little to much reading for my taste.
Number of entries read= around 30 I think.
Total: 85/100
Reviewed by: Jamie
