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sweetepy302
Reviewed @ 2:53 p.m. on 2003-06-18
First Impression= [5/5]
Aww, that's pretty.
Layout= [28/30]
The layout is really pretty. Credit to Designs By Kat. This is one of the type of layouts that I really like - with the entry and picture centered, and everything else kind of offset. You have a currently section, which is cool, but your two sidebars are way out of proportion as far as text amount goes. I would maybe switch the "currently" section with your "links" section to balance things out.
You might want to move your bravenet counter if you can, it kind of messes things up a little. It disturbs the natural ebb of this layout. Otherwise, everything seems to be in order.
Content= [25/20]
Before I actually delve into your content, I should say that your abbriviations for "with" and "because" really annoy me. I know it's your diary, and if you want to abbriviate, then do it, but when you see "w/" instead of "with", it kind of breaks the natural flow of the writing, if you know what I mean.
This was the second entry I read, and in it you totally poured out your soul. This entry held everything from your moodswings to your feelings on Dan, and it was very insightful to me. I also related a lot to it, because you seem a lot like me - very emotional, very private, and very mixed up over a guy named Dan.
Your hopeless romantic entry was another incredibly insightful entry. "I pride myself on being a pretty independent person. I'm not one of those silly girl who must have a boyfriend at all times. No, I don't need a boyfriend or a man st my side at all times to face the world." A very good mindset on life. Stick with it always, it'll never fail you.
I understand your feelings on the sort of love triangle between you, Dan, and Lauren. If he were trying to "have" you both, I would be furious too. It isn't too much to ask to be number one, not just a second-stringer.
I also understand how you feel about life after high school. I have those same thoughts on having an interesting job every day of my life. Just like you, I don't want to be stuck in a job where I'm going to be miserable.
I love this song too!
Ah ha! I've found my other half! "I'd rather buy three shirts at Penny's then one that says Abercrombie on it." I feel exactly the same way!!
I'm happy that you aren't a threat to pedestrians. This entry was cute, a funny little break from the heavy, emotion packed entries you've put out before.
I feel the same about graduating friends. One of my two best friends graduated this year, and it hit hard to know that I wouldn't see her next year.
Okay, all in all, I'm giving you five extra points because everything you say relates to my life. I would love to talk to you, and get to know you better, because you sure have reached out to me.
Where's the link= [5/5]
On the links page.
Errors= [5/5]
Didn't find any.
Contact= [3/4]
Guestbook, notes, aim on profile.
Organization= [9/10]
Like I said, maybe switch your links section and your currently section to balance things out more.
Updates= [9/10]
Since you started, I counted maybe 3 skips. Good job.
Bonus= [5/5]
Fave songs and movies, quizzes, 101 facts, rings, recent books you've read, surveys, interesting websites, a friend test. More than enough to keep visitors happy.
Will I be coming back?= [6/6]
Absolutely. Adding you to my favorites.
What I thought of the diary?
I relate to you so much. It's strange how alike we seem.
Number of entries read= all
Total: [100/100] Welcome to the Hall of Fame.
Reviewed by Heather
