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tear-fucked
Reviewed @ 5:38 p.m. on 2003-12-24

First Impression= [2/5]

Geen, pink and black???

Layout= [5/15]

I'm guessing you got that layout here I can't stand those colors together and the green on the black makes it impossible for it to read. But I do like how the navigator thingy drops down when you click on it! Probably something I'd use for my diary, but not those colors.

Content= [10/35]

I was glimpsing throught your entries before I actually started to read them. I don't know if you are trying to write a story, or that you are talking about your daily life in the 3rd person I guess.

Second entry I read and already I am rolling my eyes as in why you would write, what seems, a story of a girl wanting to cut herself. First cutting, now smoking? I'm up to this entry and I still have yet found a reason or some kind of point to this story.

Money is worthless when what you want isn't for sale. I loved that! lol.

Okay, so I am guessing that it is about your daily life, but it kinda feels like I am reading a story. A very fucked up story about a girl who only thinks about cutting herself or when she used to cut herself. Your entries just bored me and made me do a lot of eye rolls, which doesn't look good for you.

I do like how you write. Like it was a story. I will give you points for that. But, that's about it. Maybe I am not a depressed freak who gets off on cutting herself.

Where's the link?= [5/5]

Here.

Errors= [4/5]

I took secretarial in high school. So, I pay attention to the periods (.) and comas (,) and in your writting, you don't leave any space between them. You should leave two spaces after every period (question mark or exclamation mark) and one space after every coma

Contact= [4/4]

email, guestbook, notes, aim, guestmap

Updates= [10/10]

Everyday.

Organization= [8/10]

It's organized, but some of the links are a little not organized. Just a little crazy party they are having there it seems! lol.

Extras= [5/5]

Extras page.

Would I come back?= [1/6]

Um, no.

Additional Comments

Good luck with everything and happy holidays and a great new year!

Number of entries read= 20

Total: 54/100 Welcome to the Hall of Shame

Reviewed by: ~Nancy~