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troubledgurl
Reviewed @ 6:35 p.m. on 2003-04-25
First Impression = 3/5
Oh look, it's Clay from American Idol. See the sarcasm?
Where's the link? = 5/5
Right on the main template.
Layout = 15/30
Another Lissy design. I don't mind the wannabe American Idol, really I don't. But you butchered this template. Originally it's all peach and white. You decided to change things up and throw in purple. You added a bunch of stuff to the left which makes it look like a cluttered mess. You have the tag board, notify list, bravenet stats, some banner, and random other things all over the main entry page.
Archive has the same template, but that looks different too. Your guestbook has a different template. Some older entries have an older template. Your tagboard doesn't match AT ALL.
The original layout, although I hate it, would've received at least a 25. Since you altered it and cluttered it, I had to reduce it.
Content = 4/20
The first thing I noticed was your age, 12-13. The second thing I noticed was you have a link to 'fucklist'. I'm shaking my head at you right now.
You curse. A lot. You write daylog. Nothing of interest to me.
I tried to find an entry to comment on, but they are all boring to me. Then I went and looked (cheated) at another review you got. They said the same thing I said, so now I don't feel so bad.
Errors = 2/5
Your 'more' link doesn't work. The mess you created on the main page doesn't match the archived page. A lot of your graphics on your 'tests' page doesn't work. Your 'rings' page has a completely different, yet overly used, template. Your guestbook has yet another template.
This isn't really an error, and I'm not sure if this is part of the template or not, but the hover you have for links is downright annoying.
Spelling, grammar, but I have to force myself to keep in mind your age.
Contact = 4/4
Email, notes, guestbook, aim, tagboard.
Organization = 7/10
Everything is listed either under navigation or under your entry. But it's a mess.
Updates = 5/10
Recently you have a lot of multiples. But in the past, you have a lot of skips.
Bonus = 4/5
Yes you have a lot of stuff.
Will I be coming back? = 0/6
Sorry, but you and I have nothing in common.
What I thought of the diary?
It's possible that your diary is good, I don't know. But I'm 16 years older than you. Maybe come back for a re-review at a much later time and request someone closer to your age.
Try not to grow up so fast. The foul language isn't impressive the way you incorporate it. You don't need a fuck list. You need to grow up a little. Especially when you call other people immature. Take a good hard look in the mirror. You are a child, enjoy it, act like it, grow up later when you have to. Clean up the language, clean up the template, write with some emotion once in a while, and run a spell check over your entries. That may help a little.
Number of entries read = 10
Total: 49/100
Reviewed by: Melody
