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victorianna
Reviewed @ 10:47 a.m. on 2003-07-31
First Impression= [5/5]
Cool picture, nice earthy tones.
Layout= [10/30]
You didn't credit a designer. Even if it's self designed, you have to credit a designer. I would've given you a 20 for layout, and since I really don't want to give you no points, 10 is the best I can do.
Unfortunately, all the excess buttons you have scattered on your template really mess up the calmness your template is trying to achieve. Your template stretches on much longer than it should. All those extra buttons, especially the big ones like your Weather Pixie and the Top 100 Diaries at D-land buttons really take away from the earthiness of the layout.
The colors. Very nicely toned.
All those buttons and extra things. You could very easily throw them onto an extras page and clean up the template.
Content= [19/20]
This was long but wonderfully sweet. From the get-go, I understand if not totally relate to about how you feel about Paul and Holleigh. You're certainly not afraid to express how you feel about Paul and to Paul. Again, another beautifully insightful entry about Paul.
It sounds like Kyle is a really sweet man. I hope everything works out for the two of you... Another good entry about Kyle... you are just full of insight. It's quite refreshing. Awww, I'm sorry to hear that things didn't work out for you. He sounded like a really sweet guy.
Although I can't relate in the most to you, you do write well and full of emotion. You put everything out in the open, going over everything, which can make for long entries. You use excessive punctuation, but that really doesn't bother me much.
Where's the link= [5/5]
A button on the main template.
Errors= [4/5]
Aside from needing archives, none.
Contact= [3/4]
Guestbook, e-mail, notes.
Organization= [7/10]
All those dreaded buttons make the layout look cluttered. Again, I suggest putting them on an extras page.
Updates= [7/10]
Sporadically. Mostly it's daily, but with several prominent skips.
Bonus= [3/5]
About you, rings, buttons galore.
Will I be coming back?= [4/6]
From time to time.
What I thought of the diary?
Please credit a designer, fix your template, and request a re-review in 30 days.
Number of entries read= July
Total: 67/100
Reviewed by: Heather
