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Reviewed @ 11:11 p.m. on 2003-10-10
First Impression= [5/5]
Good Charlotte! Yeah baby!
Layout= [22/30]
This is a lis design, featuring good Charlotte. The main colors are blue and white. The text is black and the links are white. The entry box background is white while the other back ground is blue. The navigator is all the way at the bottom and the blue space on the left side of the entry box is kind of annoying. The entire thing might look better if it was centralized. <<||>> describe your previous and next links. Not really a layout I would use for my diary.
Good Charlotte totally rocks.
There is nothing "bad" in this layout, just nothing that captures my attention.
Content= [15/20]
I had a long list here of entries that I had commented on, but then my lights just left and I lost all unsaved information! Grrrr. I am going to see if I can now skim through the entries that I read to find the ones that I commented on so I can do it again!
Okay, it is now pissing me off cause now your diary is taking forever to load up completely and I can't go through the older entries.
But I did mention about the drive by that happened. I was surprised that a drive by can occur at a bowling alley, where there are little kids around and all. Makes me wonder what this world is coming to. I also commented on how much you late your Spanish teacher. (I think it was your Spanish teacher) and I continued to mention that not to worry about it. I mentioned how much I hated my Spanish professor. My boyfriend told me I was gruesome cause I told him that I wanted to throw my pencil at her, hoping to stab her in the eye. I then go up to her, to take the pencil, which pops out her eye. Then, she tries to run to the door, but ends up running around in circles since she's only got one eye. Eventually, she runs into the wall, making herself unconscious! lol. I also commented in an entry you have where you say that high school is hard work. I tell you that it doesn't get any easier in college. (I know, some inspiration I am)
But, I did read 25 entries in total from the most current back. I realize that you surround yourself with a great deal of friends. You are into school activities and don't seem to slow down anytime soon. Oh, I did see an entry (which I also commented on) about how you see all the couples around the school and you don't have any. That was the first emotional entry I found. Which I loved. But, don't worry girl, your time will come. You just have to be patient.
I do have to say that some of the entries showed no interest to me. Not because they weren't interesting, but, it is a diary more meant for your real life friends to read. And I really have to advise you to make up a cast page. You just mention sooo many people in your diary and I had no idea who they were.
Where's the link= [6/5]
On the extras page with a button.
Errors= [5/5]
.Didn't see any errors. ~yay~
Contact= [3/4]
emails, notes, guestbook
Organization= [8/10]
Everything is organized, but that blue on the side is driving me crazy and maybe you should archives your older entries.
Updates= [7/10]
Updates a few times a week.
Bonus= [3/5]
links, notify list, extras
Would I be come back?= [4/6]
From time to time.
Additional Thoughts
Just good luck with everything girl and I am sorry that I took forever to get to your diary!
Number of entries read=25
Total: 77/100
Reviewed by: ~Nancy~
